Intent: Jason (2026-10-28): draft version R, the least corny and most engaging of five versions rated on the perceived-corniness and transportation scales, on its own branch to look at before deciding Expression: www/workshop-v2/slides.json: Bridget is Chloe's daughter; the Flash scene and the one-line morals on the story slides are cut, and slide 9 no longer speaks of tools out of reach; the turning point is 'Mine doesn't do anything.', left unresolved through both exercises; after Exercise 2 the story ends on two live p5.js sketches ('The app's looked better.' and 'In the morning', Bridget's crooked orange brush), then 'The tool is real' states p5.js and Lauren Lee McCarthy as fact outside the story; the supercar, the point of the story and the four questions follow as the argument; times rebalanced to 88 minutes; build.cjs run of show and verify.cjs (46 slides, 17 images) updated Demonstrates: node www/workshop-v2/verify.cjs passes; under a local fossil ui (same CSP and skin as the server), Chromium driven over DevTools draws orange with Bridget's brush, with no CSP violations, and the placemat, alebrije, first sketch and p5-real slides render within the slide

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 5.5 (1M context) noreply@anthropic.com Claude-Session: https://claude.ai/code/session_01TUH8KK2Go6LY3bThfCuUie check-in: 8b02bfc20c user: run-abd0b0f7 tags: workshop-v2-story-r